CORPSE at the STATEHOUSE

Advice needed. I'm working on six books of fiction and one nonfiction. If they EVER get published, it will likely take 1 to 3 years. That's life.

I am sharing the opening sentences of CORPSE AT THE STATEHOUSE. What I need to know is whether this grabs your attention. Does the title? Do the first lines? Do you need more to interest you? I'm looking for serious feedback. Here are the first two sentences:

For years, the senator’s adversaries had wanted him silenced, but that didn’t mean they wished him dead. Or did it?

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